The Ending of Zeppix
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The Ending of Zeppix
I've had three ideas for the end of Zeppix. Here they go:
Sad
The Creator decides that Daemonkind must be seperated from humankind, or there will be dire consequences. Zeppix accepts this, but asks the Creator for a favour (we don't hear this). Next scene, Zeppix is flying into a hospital. Cut to his mother is on a bed dying, his father sitting next to her.
Mother: Where's Zeppix?
Father: I don't know.
Enter Zeppix as daemon. He flies through the doors, and crouches by the bed. Laura can see daemons!
Mother: Hallo, Zeppix.
Father: He's not here, Laura...
Laura winks at Zeppix.
Mother: Sorry. I... Goodbye, James. WhispersGoodbye Zeppix...
Laura dies.
Zeppix (crying) teleports away. He reappears in a new universe with no humans, only daemons. He looks up. Zoom out. Credits roll.
Happy?
Zeppix has defeated Vaizarr. The creator grants him a favour. He asks, this is inaudible also. Cut to beginnning scene, with the sword flying towards Zeppix (human). Zeppix (daemon) catches the sword, and throws it in opposite direction. Zeppix (human) survives. Zeppix (daemon)' body disintegrates (he never exists). Zeppix (human) runs back and hugs his father.
Inconclusive extra:
In addition to this, maybe show a shot of Vaizarrs army heading towards London. Zeppix is not there to save it!
Which do you prefer? I think plain happy is quite good.
Sad
The Creator decides that Daemonkind must be seperated from humankind, or there will be dire consequences. Zeppix accepts this, but asks the Creator for a favour (we don't hear this). Next scene, Zeppix is flying into a hospital. Cut to his mother is on a bed dying, his father sitting next to her.
Mother: Where's Zeppix?
Father: I don't know.
Enter Zeppix as daemon. He flies through the doors, and crouches by the bed. Laura can see daemons!
Mother: Hallo, Zeppix.
Father: He's not here, Laura...
Laura winks at Zeppix.
Mother: Sorry. I... Goodbye, James. WhispersGoodbye Zeppix...
Laura dies.
Zeppix (crying) teleports away. He reappears in a new universe with no humans, only daemons. He looks up. Zoom out. Credits roll.
Happy?
Zeppix has defeated Vaizarr. The creator grants him a favour. He asks, this is inaudible also. Cut to beginnning scene, with the sword flying towards Zeppix (human). Zeppix (daemon) catches the sword, and throws it in opposite direction. Zeppix (human) survives. Zeppix (daemon)' body disintegrates (he never exists). Zeppix (human) runs back and hugs his father.
Inconclusive extra:
In addition to this, maybe show a shot of Vaizarrs army heading towards London. Zeppix is not there to save it!
Which do you prefer? I think plain happy is quite good.
ExWhyZed- Posts : 641
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Re: The Ending of Zeppix
I vote sad.ExWhyZed wrote:I've had three ideas for the end of Zeppix. Here they go:
Sad
The Creator decides that Daemonkind must be seperated from humankind, or there will be dire consequences. Zeppix accepts this, but asks the Creator for a favour (we don't hear this). Next scene, Zeppix is flying into a hospital. Cut to his mother is on a bed dying, his father sitting next to her.
Mother: Where's Zeppix?
Father: I don't know.
Enter Zeppix as daemon. He flies through the doors, and crouches by the bed. Laura can see daemons!
Mother: Hallo, Zeppix.
Father: He's not here, Laura...
Laura winks at Zeppix.
Mother: Sorry. I... Goodbye, James. WhispersGoodbye Zeppix...
Laura dies.
Zeppix (crying) teleports away. He reappears in a new universe with no humans, only daemons. He looks up. Zoom out. Credits roll.
Happy?
Zeppix has defeated Vaizarr. The creator grants him a favour. He asks, this is inaudible also. Cut to beginnning scene, with the sword flying towards Zeppix (human). Zeppix (daemon) catches the sword, and throws it in opposite direction. Zeppix (human) survives. Zeppix (daemon)' body disintegrates (he never exists). Zeppix (human) runs back and hugs his father.
Re: The Ending of Zeppix
Oh, you have made a GREAT sad ending Exwhyzed.
I once thought of a ending:
- Everything is over, Vaizakk is defeated -
- Zeppix stands on a roof -
"My name is Zeppix, and I am a Daemon!"
- Last shot will hold still like a picture, and turns gray -
- Great ending song is played -
- Credits scroll up -
Why? Because then it is an open ending.
Though, your sad ending is quite nice too.
So I maybe go with that one...
I once thought of a ending:
- Everything is over, Vaizakk is defeated -
- Zeppix stands on a roof -
"My name is Zeppix, and I am a Daemon!"
- Last shot will hold still like a picture, and turns gray -
- Great ending song is played -
- Credits scroll up -
Why? Because then it is an open ending.
Though, your sad ending is quite nice too.
So I maybe go with that one...
Re: The Ending of Zeppix
What the heck are you talking about?TP09 wrote:Who's Bernini and what the hell kinda picture are you talking about?!
It doesn't have anything to do with Zeppix.
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