Zeppix' Mission

[ExWhyZed]

Zeppix is given a "mission". How?

I think that he should be told of Vaizakk's plans by various people. He is infuriated, and seeks to find Myroel. Myroel tells him how Vaizakk plans to carry out his genocide. Zeppix determines that he must find the artifact.

Zeppix undertakes his mission.

Zeppix leaves Myroel to find the Artifact, but doesn't know where it is. He returns to the palace, and finds Vaizakk back, killing daemons. Zeppix challenges Vaizakk, and they fight. Vaizakk knocks Zeppix from the arena, and he falls. He regains his balance, and lands on a building. He sees a helicopter coming at him.
After his escape from the General and the Pilot, he goes in search of Myroel again. He finds him in the CADD headquarters, and frees him. Myroel tells him that the artifact was in the home of the Creator - Hevole, a land outside of our own, and heaven and hell.
Zeppix escapes, but Myroel gets killed in the gunfire. Zeppix flies up to the Citadel to find out how to reach Hevole. Sylnyte tells him that he would have to find the Gap. The border between reality and Heaven, Hell and Hevole. She doesn't know where it is, but she knows it is near London.
Zeppix ventures to London, trying to avoid the CADD. He gets caught up with them once or twice, though. He finds another daemon that "helps" him find the Gap, but turns out to be a henchman of Vaizakk. Zeppix drags him through the gap, and they find themselves in a small room. There is a door on each side, one to each world. They were not labelled.
The other daemon heads to the grandest, and opens it. A large red hand pulls him through, slamming to door behind it. His mauled body is tossed back through after a few moments. That place is obviously Hell. Zeppix chooses another door at random, and finds himself back in the real world, in the centre of London, away from the gap. Daemons working for Vaizakk are hunting everywhere, killing humans at random. He goes to the gap. Vaizakk is standing there, with another daemon. They enter.
Zeppix curses, and follows them. He picks another door at random, and enters Hevole. Ahead of him, Vaizakk is flying towards a palace. Zeppix takes off and starts following him. Vaizakk turns, and pulls out a hand crossbow. He fires.
A hole is torn in Zeppix' wing, and he falls to the ground. When he wakes up, the sky is turning red. Vaizakk has the artifact! Zeppix hurries to the Palace, and finds the Creator lying limp on the floor. The Creator gets up, and uses the last of his power to send Zeppix back to the Real World. He finds the army of Vaizakk marching on London, led by Vaizakk.
He also a CADD helicopter going towards the army, the General hanging onto the rope ladder, shooting at the army. The CADD have been working on a device that will let everyone see the daemons, so they can enlist mililtary help. They activate it as soon as Zeppix reaches the army, and suddenly everyone can see them. Zeppix flies up to Vaizakk, and punches him in the face. Vaizakk doesn't even flinch. He has the Artifact.
The army arrives, and starts attacking the army. The CADD helicopter is destroyed about here. Zeppix finds Sylnyte in the army, and borrows her armour as disguise. He gets behind Vaizakk, and tries to remove the Artifact. Unfortunately, Vaizakk punches back, causing Zappix to fall a little way.
Eventually, what's left of the daemon army retreats, and only Vaizakk and Zeppix (in female armour) remain. Zeppix challenges Vaizakk to remove the armour so that they might have a fair fight. They do, and Zeppix wins.

[Kyon]

No, I don't like it.
Make it easyer.
Point out the goal, point out the way to get there (how to reach the goal).
Then make some obstacles.
Put them all in a list.

THEN we can write it down.
First lets make this list.

Goal
- Find the artifact before Vaizakk does
- Artifact is in Heaven/Hell (needs name) (same thing), the creator guards it.

Obstacles
- The CADD
- The Portal to Heaven/Hell (wich is hard to get to)
- The followers of Vaizakk
- The creatures of Heaven/Hell.